POEM by Susan Mehr
To thee,
I write,
A poem,
To sing,
Mere words,
That mean,
Everything,
One song,
One heart,
One voice,
One dream,
A heartfelt,
Sigh,
A theme, Unbeseen,
Humming,
Whistling,
To thee,
From me,
A poem,
To share,
Only your heart, can see.
I love the skeletonic flow of this.
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A Poem
A Soul
tHaT Sees
tHe heART
oF me
UnLocKeD
A SpiRiT FReED..:)
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Thank you for your comment, love your comments throughout. 🙂
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Hi Susan..
Thanks for
The Muse
Of Your
Poetry..:)
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Nice idea to put the poem into the second person. That last line reminds me of “The Little Prince” “The essential is invisible to the eyes.”
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Thank you for your comment. Some poems rhyme and some don’t and there are a few that have no words. ‘The Little Prince’ I haven’t read it, it seems like a book I would love to read, thank you. 🙂
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It’s brilliant. You think it’s for kids but…a classic. Original in French. Go there if You speak French.
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I like the idea of a poem for only one special person.
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I believe a true gift is a piece of one’s heart. 🙂
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Special poem of a very special person!
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I believe a poem is always for someone special, even if it’s yourself.
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Yes!
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The poem having a receiver is a very special gift.
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It’s true.
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“mere words” they can mean so much. Your poem, shaped like a ladder, a bridge, a rope out the window, landing finally at its destination, proves the idea.
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Thanks for your comment. I love happy endings.
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Gorgeously penned ❤️💕❤️
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thank you for your comment.
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Loved this Susan! (I’ll email tomorrow). 🙂
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Somehow this reminded me of Nick Bantock’s “Griffith and Sabine”, and their exchanges.
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Thank you for you comment. I have to look at Nick Bantock’s Griffith and Sabine, you have me interested.
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