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Friday Fictioneers
Panic and Hope
Time is racing. How do we fight when the body is beyond repair? Even when the odds pile against us? Do we still have the strength? Why live to hope, when all that’s left is empty space. Can’t find the faith, lost the fight inside, as innocent lives slip through our hands. Hope’s so far away.
We need to care, not let weakness be the stronger. We are standing together yet still prisoners inside our skin. Dreams do not die, maybe tomorrow the shelves won’t be empty and hope the end isn’t miles away.
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Ah, often it is the dreams that keep us going. Nicely put.
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Yes, thanks for your comment.
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Let’s hope the end isn’t miles away
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Yes, let’s hope. Thanks for your comment.
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End Times.
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So true, it feels like it is. Thanks for your comment.
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Thought provoking! Nicely done, Susan.
Susan A Eames at
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Well, Susan, that was breathless!
Cleverly built sense of urgency bordering on panic.
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So long as there is that glimmer of hope, we have a reason to keep going, no matter how far away it seems.
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Christ, thats bleak, but brilliant, I read it thrice over, great stuff
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And through it all, hope remains.. Well told.
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Dear Susan,
Let’s hope this isn’t prophetic, although, lately it feels that way. Well penned.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Your story races along, exemplifying the Panic of the title, and you hold out the possibility that tomorrow will be better as your Hope. I hope we don’t have to live through such times.
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I hope too.
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Without hope we have nothing. Well done.
Here’s mine!
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I agree.
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Sometimes hope is hard to find, even when it’s all we have. Good story.
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So true, thanks.
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So true. Thanks.
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Well-paced piece! Urgent and despairing. Let’s hope we all keep the faith!
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As long as we can find hope, we’ll be able to push on through. Nice one!
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Yes, everyone must keep fighting and believing
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If I’ve learned anything from all the sci-fi/fantasy writers I’ve read over the years, it’s that you never give up hope!
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just keep hoping. all’s lost when all hopes are gone.
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A thoughtful reflection, about important ideas for pondering on.
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Hope is the only thing left in the end… in the meantime, there are onions to eat.
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Yes, I guess. Thanks for your comment.
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Bleak moments are I think, part of being human. Dealing with them can be challenging
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I agree. Thanks or your comment.
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It is crafted with the rhythm of a poem. Well done.
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Lovely, there is quite a rhythm to this.
I agree, we have to keep hope going
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Beautifully written and highly reflective prose-poetry. We should never lose hope despite all adversities and uncertainties in our lives.
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You are right, never lose hope. Thanks, Marta for your comment.
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You are welcome kindly.
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Hi Susan, I read your blog about Panic and Hope, as I had written a blog as well about Panic, and wanted to see what else was written about it. Well done!! loved reading the comments of the other readers as well–obviously your poetry has struck a chord in many others. If you are curious about my piece, here is a link to it: https://katiesencouragementforyou.home.blog/2020/03/13/there-is-no-reason-to-panic-is-there/
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You are welcome, thank you for reading my blog!!
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Maybe tomorrow. I’ve got to stop saying that. Make tomorrow today.
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That’s true. thanks. BTW I like the mug. 🙂
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