GRACE by Susan Mehr

Step! Two three and again
step two now – turn around

voice receding
centrifugal distant tracking
rhythm rises
drum  …  beat
light deepening


‘No! … Back in we go.’
‘But … I can’t!’
‘Don’t worry, I’ll lead.’
‘I’m like a Hippo in a tutu!’
‘At least you’re my Hippo!’ 🙂







11 thoughts on “GRACE

  1. Susan, Welcome to the Casting Bricks Challenge; I’m thrilled you have joined in! Your completion of Petru’s poem is simply charming, but then, I’m a huge fan of Fantasia. You are more than welcome to add a half poem challenge of your own, or complete any of the other challenges. ~ Jilly

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